Blogging Challenge my Zoom out story

On the 10th April we played the Zoomout Game. This is a follow up post. The Zoomout Game is when you add an image to your blog, and start a story in the comment section. Other classmates  add to your story in the comment section. Finally we had to create a story from what people said in the comments. 

These are the comments people made in my blog

1. The little rabbit stayed completely still because it was hiding from from the cat.
2. Then the cat saw him and pounced but the rabbit was too fast and he ran away to the safety of his nearby burrow.
3.He was so scared that he got out his paintball gun.
4. When he started shooting it was so powrful the little rabbit started to bounce every where.
5.He hit the cat a couple of times and the cat went away.
6. Little rabbit was relieved. he was very scared of the cats

Here is my story made from the comments

The Rabbit And The Cats

One sunny day a rabbit came and saw a cat in the yard. The little rabbit stayed still and it pretended that it was dead.Then 
more cats came and looked at the little rabbit. The rabbit peered open one eye and saw the cats.The cats walked around the rabbit and the cats thought that the rabbit was dead.They came closer and closer to the rabbit .The cat surrounded the rabbit.

The rabbit hid a paintball gun underneath its fat belly. he was so scared that one of the cats jumped,and the rabbit took out the paintball gun and shot the cat that was in the air. The rabbit ran away from the cats but there were to many cats surrounding the rabbit. It jumped over on of the cats and the rabbit hid himself underneath the car. The rabbit thought that he was trapped and he didn't know what to do.

The cats waited for the Rabbit to come out. The rabbit had faith inside him and he came out and jumped up in the air and shot all the cats around him with the paintball gun. The cats were still moving and all the cats asked for forgiveness to the rabbit. The rabbit was revealed that he was no more scared of silly little furry cats.